ext_29231 ([identity profile] celticfaerie2.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] fightingthecage 2005-04-04 02:23 pm (UTC)

Gah. I don't even know where to start. Absolutely brilliant, dear. I love how the scene from the past is interwoven into the present, very effective. It flows seamlessly, which is often hard to do effectively.

And the tension between Jack and Tony, with Michelle right in the middle of it. Ha! Lovely! Not quite as lovely as the Jack/Tony hotness, but yeah. heh. I love how Jack needs Tony, and how Tony responds to that, giving Jack what he needs. Very very very nice.

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